Laurie McDaniel

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TO BREATHE YOU IN

I BREATHE YOU IN LIKE A MORNING MIST
A SWEET AROMA OF DEW
AND FOG
OF TIME STANDING STILL
OF A LOVERS SONG

IN THE WAKE OF WEE HOURS
IN MY ARMS
SAFE SECURE
FREE FROM HARM

THE SMELL OF YOU PUTS ME IN A TRANCE
DAZED AND WANTING
YOUR SWEET ROMANCE

THE MUSKY SCENT I HUNGER FOR
IS THE SMELL
YOU’LL FIND IN MY ETERNAL CORE

TO BREATHE YOU IN
IS ALMOST A SIN
IT DRIVES ME WILD
I CAN’T PRETEND

I GET LOST WITH YOU
I ALWAYS WANT MORE
THE SMELL OF YOU
LIKE AN OCEAN SHORE

THE PURENESS I SMELL
IS ONE OF A KIND
OF A LOVERS TASTE
PLEASURE ENTWINED

YOUR SMELL KEEPS ME WANTING
MORE THAN WHAT I SHOULD
TO TEASE ME LIKE THAT
WITH ALL YOUR MALE GOODS

TO BREATH YOU IN
JUST YOU
CLEAN OR DIRTY
GETS ME ALL GIDDY AND ALOT FLIRTY

YOUR SMELL IS ORIGINAL
I CAN NOT DENY
WITH YOU I’LL ALWAYS WANT TO BE
AND TO NEVER LEAVE YOUR SIDE

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10 comments on “TO BREATHE YOU IN

  1. lenwilliamscarver
    November 14, 2012

    Oh so sensual!!

  2. Johan Hoeff
    November 14, 2012

    Excellent.

  3. Johan Hoeff
    November 14, 2012

    Forgot to ask: I would like to repost this in one of my Categories, Poetics/Eros, how do you want me to list the copyright?

    All the best…

    • lmcdaniel
      November 17, 2012

      Laurie McDaniel will be fine thanx;)

  4. mary hixson
    November 17, 2012

    i think you should check your spelling. breath? breathe.

    • lmcdaniel
      November 17, 2012

      LOL o being the typo queen lol thanks

  5. lmcdaniel
    November 17, 2012

    FIXING MY TYPOS LOL

  6. PapaBear
    December 13, 2014

    Laurie,
    I haven’t visited your site for a long time now and happened on this post. Its a really fantastic literation of passionate emotion. Sensual, to say the least. Congrats on it !
    🙂

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